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BYU Facility and Property Management Leadership for buildings, systems, stewardship, and long-term value.

Revision log

The public-facing pages are quieter now, but the review trail is still preserved here.

Revision scaffolding has been reduced across the client-visible pages. This log keeps the internal audit trail, archived drafts, and next-pass notes in one place.

Current

Revision 04

Client-ready editorial pass with minimal preview chrome, sharper ruled containers, stronger student-path guidance, updated canonicals, and source-backed copy discipline intact.

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Archived

Revision 03

First rigorous copy pass that removed unsupported claims, but still carried too much visible prototype framing and softer, rounder visual treatment.

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Archived

Revision 02

Earlier public-source rewrite. Stronger than the baseline, but it still included unsupported placement and salary language that should not return.

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Baseline

Revision 01

Placeholder prototype with filler copy, vague diagrams, and missing student-path detail. Preserved as an audit milestone rather than a launch candidate.

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